Friday, 30 March 2012

100 Word Challenge by Archie

One day a boy called Theo was scootering down the hill. Very fast, too fast. He stopped scooting to go into the shop, which sat at the bottom of the hill. His scooter was a custom scooter, which had 81 custom fubars,
Phoenix  grenade clamp, FSA Orbit Headset, District deck, grit threadless forks, blazer pro wheels, super reds bearings. when he was at the shop, he bought a chocolate rabbit. But sadly it melted in the sun later that day. Because he left it outside for all of the next day. So  be warned if you like chocolate.

100 Word Challenge by Tobias

                                    the hunt

There was a Easter hunt at Thurlton park. It was a sunny day , then tim could see a chocolate rabbit melted in the sun . tim ran over “Ono he said” he picked it up and took it to his house. The man came and had a look at the chocolate bunny but it wasn't there. he said “Ono” .He ran back and said to evey one”sorry evey one there wont be a big surprise .1 2 3 gooooooooooo and all the children ran to find all the Easter eggs before any won get them.

The end

100 Word Challenge by George



Once upon time there was a hunter and he liked shooting chocolate rabbits, dun dun                                                  dun. One day he saw chocolate rabbits so he got his shotgun and shot the rabbit.                        
He walked away as the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun. A  cat came over and   
licked it up. The cat died because he choked to death.  the hunter got sent to prison for animal abuse.  He was in prison for 37 years. meanwhile he was getting very hairy when  he got out . he looked a little like a poodle.  to this day he's never shot another rabit.

100 Word challenge by Dan


THE CHOCOLATE RABBIT


One day, a chocolate rabbit was walking down gummybear road when a mob of gingerbread men jumped out in front of him and pulled one of his legs off. Luckily, it didn’t hurt as he was made of chocolate but it did mean he couldn’t walk.
“We’re gonna leave you here to melt and we'll eat your leg to!” said a gruff gingerbread man and they walked off. Soon a gummy bear walked past.
“Yeuch! You’re gross!” he said, and ran off.
Slowly, the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun. Unfortunately, he could not be saved.

100 Word Challenge By Ellie B


The unlucky day

One day Rose, went for a walk in the woods with her dog called Buster. He is red, cind and play fall. Busterter was   acting weird, he was sniffing like he never did before. suddenly he fell in a hole and see the most beautiful golden rapper in the world,Rose get it out of the hole,  she unwrapped it, it was a chocolate bunny, when she got home, she accidentally left it in the sun so the bunny melted in the sun. so the next    day they went to the shop and bort  another scrummy chocolate bunny.
                  
 By Ellie B

       

100 word challenge by Aleysha


The unlucky day for rabbit
  One day Ellie was walking by the river, Ellie sat down because she was tyered.Ellie saw a chocolate bunny.She thought of eating it but she didn’t because someone might of lost it.So she got up and walked round the river again.When she came back the chocolate bunny had melted in the sun warl Ellie walked round the river.Sundenly a girl apered in the trees and came running over to the bench.And she shouted “ITS MELTED MUMMY”.” ow dear "OW DEAR” is that all your going to say “ow dear”.The girl started to cry.  

100 Word Challenge by Myles


The unlucky boy

Once lived a boy named Charlie. Charlie loved Easter and last year he won 8 Easter eggs at his school Easter bingo, this year he was aiming to get more. Four o'clock and Charlie was ready to play. Before he sat down, he saw the biggest Easter bunny ever but the only problem was that the odds of winning was slim so he had a different plan. He snuck into the kitchen and hide behind the door, one of dinner ladies walked past. But the chocolate bunny had melted in the sun, it was gone, melted.  

100 Word Challenge by Oliver

On good friday I heaved myself out bed for school. I got dressed, packed my bag, and left for school.On the way I didn’t meet any of my friends Eventually I arrived at school, The gates were shut. Then I saw a shining gold chocolate bunny on the school roof. I vaulted over the gate. Jumped on a plant pot. Hung of the gutter and hauled myself up. Finally I grabbed the bunny. Then I raced home realising that it was holiday. Ohno the chocolate bunny melted in the sun and made a massive mess I tried to lick some up but it had disappeared too quickly too quickly

100 word challenge by Jamie

There was a chocolate rabbit won't be long to a little boy he luvt hi rabbit but the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun  and when he found it was in a pile and he got a new one and he put it no the serfis and he came back and his big buver had  etid it.
And he was upset
and his mum got him a new one and he attid it up and when it was easter he got lots
of egs and he gave unto his mum and his dad and his big bruver the end.

100 word Challenge by Dougal

Bob and the melted chocolate rabbit



Once upon a time, there was a little boy called Bob. Later on that day, Bob started the hunt for the easter bunny. Bob's garden was massive and he still had to find other eggs to. The chocolate rabbit melted in the sun behind the stacks of firewood. Two hours later, he found every egg except one, the chocolate rabbit. He stopped for dinner and came out again. At the end of the day, just as he was coming in, he found the rabbit, so for pudin was warm melted chocolate
“YUM,YUM,YUM,” he said scoffing it down quickly.

dave the chocolate bunny !!!

In the land of sweet`s dave the chocolate bunny was at the beach.Everyone els had brung there cool box`s so they do`nt melt but dave had forgot his cool box so … dave the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun “helllp i’m  melting” dave said

“someone call an ambulance this poor rabitt is meting” said steve the gingerbread man

nee nor nee

“That`s the ambulance kwik trifels get in get the rabbit in the fridge” said steve

“Thank you er what's your name” said trifle  guy

“steve” said steve

“thanks steve” said trifle guy

100 word challenge by Charlotte

The chocolate bunny that melted.


One day the were  two  little girls. Their name were Jessica and Nina. Their nanny and grandad went for a bike ride down the block. Whilst they were gone Nina and Jessica were haveing a Easter egg hunt. Jessica found a nice little chocolate bunny rabbit. Jessica left her chocolate bunny in the sun. After about an hour she came back but it had melted.When Jessica came back she saw the chocolate melted in the sun. She cried and cried by that time her nanny and grandad were back. They heard her crying and went out as quickly as possible.
“What is wrong”
“my chocolate  has melted”

100 word challenge by Callum

Once upon a time there was a fantastic birthday party. There was a little boy called max, he loved chocolate so his mum and dad got him a chocolate rabbit. Half an hour later he went out . when he got back he got upset because the chocolate  rabbit had meltted in the sun.So after five minutes he put the rabbit in the fridge. half an hour later he got the rabbit out of the fridge. he said that it was lovely but very hard but it was still nice aswell.

100 Word Challenge by Jessica

The melting bunny

Me dad mum and my sister went out, round my granny`s house for a easter egg hunt and I found a easter bunny, dad went next he found it in one minute then it was my sister`s go,she found a bunny before anyone else, and last my mum, took five minute`s that was bad .
So we went in doors but my sister left her`s on the table by accident, then we had lunch i had pizza cheez  that was lovely and then we went out side to go up in the tree house but then my sister saw her bunny.

100 Word Challenge by Heather

the easter egg hunt



   The day came silently and slowly but it came
  but somehow it was here .The big easter hunt,      
 everyone gathered in the street standing and  staring at the chocolate rabbit because it had melted in the boiling  hot sun .The whole street gasped in amazement and started shouting”that was the only prize we had to offer”.then the town cryer came out and said” G’DAY TO YOU ALL WHAT SEEMS  TO BE THE PROBLEM “.our chocolate bunny has melted mr town cryer “ “oh ok i'll go to new york to get another one” “but  “  there’s no other way for it .The very next day he went to get one  and the easter hunt began again .

100 Word Challenge by Ellie K

“Mum!The eater bunny’s here, I saw him!”
“Go back to bed Lisa! Nobody has ever seen the easter bunny, you must be dreaming,” cried Lisa,s mum grumpily, tossing in her bed.
“But,”she stammered...
“Lisa!” She knew that voice very well, but she definitely saw the easter bunny.

The next day, the first thing Lisa saw was a pile of easter eggs by her bed.
“Mum! Look how many eggs I’ve got,” she stopped, “but where’s my chocolate bunny?” After a stressful morning, looking for the bunny, Lisa suddenly saw it. The easter bunny had melted in the sun.

100 Word Challenge by Poppy


The Hunt

The easter egg hunt had been going on for an hour now and the children were getting hot. “There it is!” Exclaimed Emma, pointing to a hole in a tree. The girls ran to the tree and pulled out the last chocolate bunny. “Dinner time!” Shouted Emily’s Dad. The girls left the bunny on the table and followed the other kids inside. Meanwhile, the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun! “Oh,no!” Shouted the girls when they came back out. “Our rabbit has melted!” “It doesn't matter. You still won and the prize is a chocolate bunny!”  Said Emily’s mum.

100 word challenge by Tia

The melting chocolate Rabbit.
      Prompt: The chocolate rabbit melted in the sun....        
One day,she sat in the tree,eating a Easter Egg.
“Juliet! Time for lunch!” Called dad.
“Coming,father! replied Juliet as she ran back into the house,leaving her Chocolate Rabbit in the tree. The chocolate Rabbit melted in the sun.
After lunch,Juliet climbed back up the tree to finish off her Chocolate Rabbit.
“Oh,No! my bunny!”yelled Juliet. She ran back into the house.
“Mum!Dad! my chocolate rabbit melted!” panicked Juliet.
“Don’t worry,darling. It’s all right.” said Mum calmly.
“We’ll get you a real bunny for easter”. Said Dad. And she did!

                      Happy
              Easter!

100 Word Challenge by Sam

Once upon a time there was a little boy named Bill. He loved to eat chocolate and it was two days away from easter.He could not wait so grabbed a easter egg from his Mum’s room and ran outside.He left it there in the middle of the garden and the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun like a frying pan.When Bill came back outside to eat the rabbit it was not there it had melted in the sun. He started crying and realised he should not of took it without permission and should not do it ever again, at all.

Sunday, 4 March 2012

William

Hi I am William. I am interested in knights and castles. I have two best friends called Felix and Toby. Felix likes guinea pigs and Toby likes to talk. I like armour and knights so much that I have got real chain mail and real armour.
I go to Thurlton Primary School and when I’m older I will get a house and convert it into a little castle - well that is me.

Oliver


Hi, my name is Oliver. I like Lego Hero Factory

 
I also like most types of lego and football.
I play football in defence and goal. I go to Thurlton Primary School  and I am not in the football team. My favourite subject is maths. I want to be an accountant when I grow up.

My rabbit was meant to be a show rabbit but they put him on sale because he was very shy.

Nina

Hi I am Nina. My favourite subjects are Maths, Art and Literacy. In my opinion, the Harry Potter films are awesome. The best character, in my mind, is Bellatrix leStrange.  Also I like sports, such as football or netball.                                                 

Dan

I’m Dan and I like Lego, apple pie, cars, star wars and computers. I’m also very into books and my favourite ones include: Artemis Fowl, the Alex Rider series, the famous five and all of the Roald Dhal books (I especially like his illustrator, Quentin Blake). I go to Thurlton Primary School, a small school in a little village called Thurlton. I’m 10 years old and in a club that does survival skills and stuff like that called cubs.

George

Hi I'm George and I am 9 years old. I like scooters. My favourite scooter is a JD bug because they’re a good type of scooter and a good brand. They do not break easily so they are good.                                                                           

Ellie B

I am Ellie, I like most things, like gymnastics.  I do a gymnastics club, I do it on Sunday in the morning.     I am 9 and I am a vegetarian, well not a true one because I eat sausages.

Sam

Hi I'm Sam, I come from Thurlton and go to school in Thurlton Primary School. I love playing on my XBOX 360 and my favourite game on it is FIFA 12. I love games a lot because I also play for a football team called ST BENET'S  WASPS. My favourite kind of footy boot is Adidas  and my favourite type is f50 which is a blue and red colour                                 These are the boots I like.





This is the scooter I like. I like to go to the skate park alot which is indoor and is in a place called GT Yarmouth and is right near the beach. This is also the XBOX I have






I also like cars and my favourite is a Lamborghini Gallardo

Poppy

Hi, I’m Poppy. I am 9 and I go Thurlton Primary School. I live on a farm in Thorpe Next Haddiscoe. I live with my Mum, Dad and my sister Millie. We have over one hundred sheep, some chickens, a dog and a cat. I am part of Beccles Kingfishers. Beccles Kingfishers is a small swimming club. I swim on Monday mornings at 6:30-7:30 am, Tuesday nights at 8-9 and Thursday nights at 7-9. I really enjoy swimming and I’m really good at it.

Dougal

Hi, I’m Dougal,  I come from Thurlton and I go to Thurlton Primary School. I love scooters, XBOX 360 and Nikes. Also, I like playing for St Benets Wasps, love cars such as Audi, BMW and Porsche.                        

Toby

Hi, I am Toby Godfrey and I'm from Thurlton Primary School. I like riding my scooter and BMX bike. I have a PS3 and my favorite game is Call of Duty- World at War. I have a cat called Mabel and my favorite food is pizza.
I have a brother called Jasper and I also like going to the skateparks on my scooter.

Ella

            Hi my name is Ella and I come from Thurlton Primary School. My favourite hobbies are creating stories, music, walking my dogs and looking after them, as well as my cat. I can play the recorder, piano and I am soon learning the clarinet. I also love to go to the park and play football and lots of other sports. I like the Internet and exploring the computer.I love reading and read every night before I go to bed, I am currently reading Bag Of Bones by Vivian French.    

Tobias

     
Hi I am Tobias Rose and I go to Thurlton Primary   School. I like to find out all about army tanks, they’re cool!



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Sid


Sid


Hi my names Sid and I like minecraft. Lego  minecraft is a virtual building game. You can build basically any thing. My favourite Lego sets are Lego star wars. I love star wars. I also think Halo is good - my favorite is Halo Reach. I like our local  park. I go to cubs and have three months to go till I go to scouts.

Jessica

Hi my name is Jessica. And I like gardening, sports, art and horse riding. I love them all very much, I will not give them up. My favourite colour is blue and my favorite pet is a Gecko and a dog. I have a dog. My favorite friend is Charlotte.

Annie

Hi I`m Annie and I like caneoing, running, cycling. I mostly like outdoor activities.My favorite colour is pink and I also like light blue. I have 1 dog, 1 brother, a Mum and a Dad. I am 10 years old.My Dad is a boat builder.

Myles


My name is Myles, also known as Mylo. I love playing sports but my favourite is football; I play for a team called St Bennets Wasps FC.  I play for the PDC, also known as the  Player Development Centre - the first step to qualify for Play for Norwich City Acadamy. I like playing on scooters with my friends. My favourite food is pizza. I also like reading, I enjoy reading Diary of a Wimpy Kid . I have three pairs of football  boots - here is one of them.

                                They are purple and pink Nike .
                         I really look forward to your comments.

   
                       

Charlotte

My name is Charlotte. My hobbies are horse riding and outdoor activities. My best friend is Jessica. I have 3 brothers and 1 half sister. My favourite colour is really light blue.

Thursday, 1 March 2012

by Archie

ARCHIE   


My name is Archie Crossan, some people call me Crossan. I like sports, especially football. Me and my mates at Thurlton Primary all play for a football team called Saint Bennetts Wasps FC. My favourite thing I do is scootering. I like to go to skate parks and buy new upgrades. My favourite food is cheese and tomato pizza, and dessert is chocolate cake and chocolate sauce.

As I said before about scooters being one of my favourite things. I do I will explain some more about them now.


This is an example of a custom scooter which has lots of brands to it like Phoenix Blazer pro and swish, they are just some scooter brands.
These are scooter parts:
GRIPS
BAR
CLAMMP
HEADSET
DECK
FORKS
BEARINGS
WHEELS
PEGS
GRIPTAPE
BRAKE              
And there are scooter sponsers like monster energy and rockstar I myself have a custom scooter which costs £210